First Draft -

Well, after a flurry of activity to get the first draft done, turned in and reviewed, I can say I have a LOT of work to do.  I find myself telling the story as an outsider, because I AM an outsider.  I am so far outside I have to make sure I leave bread crumbs on the ground so I can find my way back!  There are many things about this paper and this project that are important and yet, I still have a passive voice.  I will have to really bust a hump to get the right "voice" written into this.  Although, I still feel like I have a perspective which allows all my friends and followers to peer into this project from where I get to peer into it. . . outside looking in.  I'm working on it!